Opinions/Suggestions

[athenaltena]

I just managed to whip this thing out a few minutes ago for the anime club assembly presentation. It doesn't have any audio because the stuff I ripped from the actual video got screwed up and I can't think of anything to go with it. And I know the video is screwed up with the motion lines but at the moment I can't help it. Suggestions? I tried to fit this under a minute though it goes over.

Can be found here.

Comments

[iamasalmonscarf.livejournal.com]

It wouldn't even download on my computer...but that's probably my computer and not your amv. I have faith that it's good.

[whiteraven1313.livejournal.com]

I watched it and it's pretty good.

[athenaltena.livejournal.com]

That's good. The audience will have probably never seen an anime before so it's very bare bones, but I'm glad someone likes it.

[kawakiisakazuki.livejournal.com]

Suggestions for what?

It's the fight scene from the Kenshin movie. It must be good since they repeat it about a dozen times. ;)

If the idea is to show what anime is like, then perhaps it's a little on the bloody side? If it were me I'd use the prologue from the Laputa movie, up to where Sheeta plummets to certain and gruesome death >:)

[athenaltena.livejournal.com]

I meant suggestions on the way it was cut. Believe it or not quite a bit was edited out of that and it went from over 2 minutes to just over 1. If you couldn't tell I guess I did a good job. ^ ^

I was a bit worried about the blood, but that was all I could really get away with editing out. And it's not that bad compared to other stuff out there *coughGantzcough*. The reason I chose this scene was because I was told specifically to use a samurai scene and this was the first available one that sprung to mind. I'll think about Laputa, though. Thanks for the feedback.