Editing the beast

So now (between the school work I have to do) I've started editing the beast that is my NaNo story, which is only about halfway through the actual story, but oh well. I have a tendency to repeat myself in real life and in my writing, so I've been having to cut down on saying the same thing different ways when it's not necessary.

I've also made a few sarcastic notes to myself to the effect of "TOO SUBTLE" on some parts, most of which get axed.